What the Blind Can See [ Writing Prompt]

Writing Prompt – You lost your sight – along with everyone else on Earth – in The Great Blinding. Two years later, without warning, your sight returns. As you look around, you realize that every available wall, floor and surface has been painted with the same message – Don’t Tell Them You Can See.

[WP] You lost your sight – along with everyone else on Earth – in The Great Blinding. Two years later, without warning, your sight returns. As you look around, you realize that every available wall, floor and surface has been painted with the same message – Don’t Tell Them You Can See.
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Two years ago, the world went dark. It wasn’t gradual, like the sun setting at the end of the day—it was instant. One minute, I was shelving books at the library, the next, I couldn’t see my own hand in front of my face. It was called The Great Blinding, and no one knew why it happened. Scientists, doctors, government officials—they were all clueless. We were just… blind.

I was 24 when it happened, and my life as a librarian came to an abrupt halt. The world I loved, filled with stories, history, and knowledge, had suddenly disappeared into darkness. For the past two years, I had learned to navigate this new world, feeling my way through the small apartment I barely left and relying on audiobooks to stay connected to what used to be my passion.

Then, this morning, something unimaginable happened.

I woke up like I always did, reaching out for my walking stick by the bed, ready to feel my way to the kitchen. But as I opened my eyes—I could see. I blinked hard, thinking it was some sort of dream. But no, the light pouring through my window was real. The old curtains were drawn to the side, and the morning sun was streaming in. My breath caught in my throat as I looked around my small apartment, recognizing it from memory, but seeing it for the first time in what felt like a lifetime.

I wanted to scream with joy, to burst out into the streets and tell someone, anyone, that my sight had returned. But then I saw something strange. Something wrong.

Everywhere I looked, on every surface in the room, there was writing. Thick black letters, scrawled in uneven strokes, covered the walls, the floor, even the ceiling. The message was the same, repeated over and over again, like someone had desperately tried to make sure it wouldn’t be missed:

Don’t Tell Them You Can See.

My heart raced. My breath quickened. Who had written this? How long had it been there? More importantly, who were “they”? And why couldn’t I tell anyone?

I walked closer to the wall, running my fingers over the letters, smudged in some places like whoever wrote it had rushed. The words felt threatening, like a warning from someone who had seen too much and knew what would happen if I ignored it.

Suddenly, I thought of the world outside. Could everyone else see now, too? Was it just me? I needed answers, but I couldn’t shake the fear that gripped me. The message was everywhere—there was no way I could ignore it. I moved cautiously to the window, peeking through the blinds. Outside, everything looked normal—or as normal as it could for a world full of blind people. People were moving slowly, tapping with their canes, their faces hidden behind dark glasses or blindfolds. They were still living in darkness.

But I could see. And that terrified me.

I sank down onto the couch, gripping my knees as my mind raced. Why couldn’t I tell anyone? The answer had to be out there, but it was buried in the mystery of these words. Was this happening to anyone else? Were there others who had gotten their sight back but were too afraid to speak up?

The thought of stepping outside, of facing people who didn’t know I could see, made my skin crawl. What would they do if they found out? What would “they” do?

I stood up, pacing the room, my eyes constantly drawn back to the haunting message that seemed to follow me everywhere I looked. I wanted to scream, to tear the words off the walls, but something inside me told me to listen, to wait.

I spent my whole life before The Great Blinding helping people find answers—whether it was in the quiet corners of the library or between the pages of books long forgotten. But now, I was the one with the questions, and the answers were nowhere to be found.

For now, I’d keep this secret. I’d play along, just like everyone else. But I couldn’t stay quiet forever. I’d find out who “they” were. And when I did, I’d be ready.

For now, though, I wouldn’t tell anyone.

Not yet.

Days passed, and I did what the message told me—I didn’t tell anyone I could see. I continued to live like the rest of the world: blind, feeling my way through the streets, using my cane, keeping my eyes half-closed. But every day, the tension inside me grew. The message haunted me, repeated in my mind like a warning I couldn’t escape.

As a librarian, my instincts told me to dig deeper, to find out what was going on. So I started visiting the library again. It was a strange experience, pretending to be blind while my eyes could take in every inch of the familiar space. The shelves, covered in dust, the books untouched for two years. I wandered between them, searching for answers.

I noticed something odd about the people around me. At first, it was subtle—the way some people moved a little too confidently, as if they weren’t really feeling their way. I caught a few of them glancing around when they thought no one was watching. My suspicions grew.

One afternoon, I decided to confront one of them. There was a man I’d seen at the library often, always coming in at the same time, sitting at the same table. His movements were too smooth for someone who couldn’t see. I approached him carefully, pretending to stumble as I reached his table.

“You don’t have to pretend with me,” I whispered, my voice low but firm.

His head snapped up, and for a moment, fear flashed across his face. He quickly recovered, faking the blind act, but I knew. “I can see,” I said quietly. “And I know you can too.”

He didn’t answer right away, but his hand trembled on the edge of the table. After a long pause, he whispered back, “You shouldn’t have said that.”

A chill ran down my spine. “Why not?”

He glanced around, his voice even quieter now. “They’re watching. They always are. If you admit it, they’ll come for you.”

“Who’s ‘they’?” I demanded, trying to keep my voice steady. I could feel the tension in the air, like we were being listened to.

He swallowed hard, leaning in closer. “I don’t know who they are exactly, but ever since some of us got our sight back, people have disappeared. If you let them know you can see, they’ll take you. No one knows where.”

I stared at him, my heart pounding. “How many of us are there?”

“Not many,” he replied. “But enough that they’ve noticed. I don’t know why some of us got our sight back and others didn’t, but the ones in control… they don’t want us to say anything. They’ve built a world that relies on the blindness. If we can see, we’re a threat.”

It hit me like a punch to the gut. The world had adapted to the blindness, become dependent on it. I hadn’t realized it before, but now it made sense. Everything was designed to keep people from seeing again.

“But why?” I asked, my voice shaking. “Why not let everyone see again?”

He shook his head. “I don’t know. Maybe they’re afraid of losing control. Maybe they don’t want us to question things. All I know is that if you tell anyone, if they even suspect you, you’re gone.”

A cold dread settled in my chest. The message on my walls—it wasn’t just a warning. It was a survival tactic.

Just then, the door to the library creaked open, and my blood ran cold. Two figures entered, dressed in black, their movements slow and deliberate. They didn’t carry canes, and I noticed they weren’t feeling their way around.

The man across from me stiffened. “They know,” he whispered, his face pale. “They’ve been watching.”

I stood up slowly, pretending to be blind again, but I could feel their eyes on me. The figures were moving closer, circling the tables. I tried to act normal, but inside, I was panicking. They were coming for me.

Without thinking, I turned and made my way toward the back of the library, my cane tapping the ground like I was still blind. My heart raced as I reached the emergency exit. The figures were behind me now, their footsteps too quiet, too deliberate.

I pushed open the door and bolted into the alley. I ran like my life depended on it—because it did. I didn’t know where I was going, only that I had to get away. My vision blurred with panic, but I kept running, hearing the footsteps behind me grow louder.

I finally ducked into an abandoned building, my breath ragged as I crouched in the darkness. The footsteps stopped, and I held my breath, praying they wouldn’t find me.

And then, I heard a voice. Cold, calm, and far too close for comfort.

“We know you can see.”

I froze, my entire body trembling. The darkness closed in around me, but this time, it wasn’t the blindness. It was fear. I had broken the one rule I shouldn’t have, and now, they were coming for me.

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